Playing with my One Line Hook, again......

Hello All,

I am spending the day inside while the rain and sun play chase outside my window, creating the perfect day for brushing up my One Line Hook and finishing the selection for this month's Book Club.

What do you think of this One Line Hook?

When God creates two people, meant to be One, and places them on different worlds, He directs the Guardian Angels to bring the man, Seth, to the woman’s world, but neither angels nor humans know if Seth will choose to listen to God in order to find the one created for him.

Is it better than the ones below? Any and all comments welcome.

Thanks!
Blessings